I love to visit new places

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uzmaaa

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I just love to visit new place. This world is so beautiful, so why not explore the whole world. Nature is full of love everyone should be blessed by this love.
 

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"Place" should be "places".
 

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The last sentence is a run-on sentence. It needs punctuation.
 

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This world is so beautiful, so why not explore the whole world.

And this one should end with a question mark.
 

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I just love to visit new place. This world is so beautiful, so why not explore the whole world. Nature is full of love everyone should be blessed by this love.

I enjoy going to places that I haven't been to before. Nobody will ever live long enough to see everything. That's why we have books. I suppose you could say that Yellowstone is full of love, or you could say it is full of fascinating geological features.

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And nature fills some places with poisonous and dangerous animals rather than love. ;-)
 
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