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    Check my fragment of cover letter?

    Hi,
    Could you please check and correct my writing?
    Does my text sound natural? If not, how can I fix it?

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    Please excuse the impersonal appearance of this letter, but I have just now relocated permanently to United Kingdom. I am currently at the stage of looking for a job, and I am open to a wide variety of options. With the enclosed resume, I would like to introduce you to my qualifications and experience and acquaint you with the considerable skills which I have to offer. I believe that my skills and strengths are an excellent match for your company profile.
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    Thank you in advance for your help.

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    Re: Check my fragment of cover letter?

    I think you should focus on what job you are applying for at the company you are writing to. Tell them why you want to work there and why you believe you would be a good fit for them.

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