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    #1

    will check

    Are these sentences correct?

    I called Mr. Leong's office to enquire if he has prepared the report and his assistant said she would check with Mr. Leong and would call me back to let me know.

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    #2

    Re: will check

    It is one sentence. I would use a comma after "report". Otherwise, it is OK.

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    #3

    Re: will check

    It's a long sentence with too many uses of the word "and", in my opinion. I would go for:

    I called Mr Leong's office to ask if he had prepared the report. His assistant said she would check with Mr Leong, then call me back.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #4

    Re: will check

    I had no problem with the length of the original.

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    #5

    Re: will check

    I assumed you had no problem with the length of the original. Had you had a problem with it, you probably would have said so in your first response. I find it over-long.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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