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    Could you please check my points for CV?

    Hey friends,
    I am going to apply to a job. Could you please check it out because I want to make sure that it is grammatically correct.
    Thanks in advance.



    Experience:
    [name of company]
    • Control of quality of manufactured product
    • Refurbish and fabricate machinery parts in fine tolerances
    • Production of accurate turned parts (single or series parts, machine parts according to drawings)


    [name of company]
    • Gas line installation, repair and service
    • Diagnosing, and repairing leaks in gas line
    • Detecting the exact problem area and repairing the line with using special sensory equipment


    [name of company]
    • Fabrication precision equipment
    • Refurbish and fabricate precision forms of plant equipment
    • Manufacture metal parts and rubber and plastic components in large precision

  2. autominus's Avatar
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    #2

    Re: Could you please check my points for CV?

    Would someone please help me with this writing!

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    #3

    Re: Could you please check my points for CV?

    [name of company]

    • Quality control of quality of manufactured products
    • Refurbishing and fabricating machinery parts in fine tolerances
    • Production of accurate turned parts (single or series) parts, and machine parts according to drawings



    [name of company]

    • Gas line installation, repair and service
    • Detecting, logging and reporting gas line leaks
    • Locating leak areas and repairing the line using specialized equipment



    [name of company]

    • Fabrication of precision equipment
    • Refurbishing and fabricating precision forms of plant equipment
    • Precision manufacturing of metal parts and rubber and plastic components in large precision



    I would advise you to include the dates you worked at the various companies mentioned in your CV.

  4. autominus's Avatar
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    #4

    Re: Could you please check my points for CV?

    Thank you for your answer.

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