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    Please check my first paragraph of cover letter

    Below is my first paragraph of cover letter for job in the field of IT/computer science. Any suggestion or modification from you will be of great help for me.



    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am interested in working for your company because of its high reputation as an excellent IT organisation with a keen drive for innovation and technical advancement. I am currently looking for a position as a network administrator or systems administrator, but I am open to a wide variety of options careers in your company.

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    Your help will be appreciated greatly.
    Last edited by dkqmail; 01-Jul-2015 at 16:18.

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    Re: Please check my first paragraph of cover letter

    Quote Originally Posted by dkqmail View Post
    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am interested in working for your company because of its high strong reputation as an excellent IT organization with a keen drive for innovation and technical advancement. I am currently looking for a position as a network administrator or systems administrator, but I would also be interested in other suitable positions that may be available am open to a wide variety of options careers in your company.
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