Could you please check my Cover Letter?

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autominus

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Hey friends,
I am going to apply to a job. Could you please check it out because I want to make sure that it is grammatically correct.
Thanks in advance.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am interested in working for your company because of its excellent reputation. I am currently looking for a position as a conventional lathe turner, but I would also be interested in other suitable positions that may be available in your company.

As indicated in the enclosed resume, I possess exceptional working knowledge of using precision instruments and core machine tools and am familiar with machining properties and the use of composite materials. Having worked for a considerable time period as a conventional turner, I developed the necessary skills that are needed to do this job perfectly. My advanced knowledge of tool holders, cutting tools and fixtures provides me with a strong edge.

Furthermore, my physical dexterity and stamina assist me in ensuring that I work well within this challenging environment. I also possess mathematical skills and knowledge of geometry and algebra that are needed to fabricate tools, parts, forms and dies.

I would be most grateful if you could consider me for any suitable positions available within your company. I am available for interview at any time and look forward to hearing from you. I can also provide outstanding personal and professional references.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely yours,


 

autominus

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Would someone please help me with this writing!
 

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am interested in working for your company because of its excellent reputation. I am currently looking for a position as a conventional lathe turner, but I would also be interested in other suitable positions that may be available in your company.

As indicated in the enclosed resume, I possess exceptional working knowledge of using precision instruments and core machine tools, and I am familiar with various machining procedures [STRIKE]properties[/STRIKE] and the use of composite materials. Having worked for a considerable time [STRIKE]period[/STRIKE] as a conventional turner, I have developed [STRIKE]the necessary skills that are needed to do this job perfectly. My[/STRIKE] advanced skills in and gained valuable knowledge of tool holders, cutting tools and other fixtures. [STRIKE]provides me with a strong edge.
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I also [STRIKE]possess[/STRIKE] have the mathematical skills and the knowledge of geometry and algebra [STRIKE]that are[/STRIKE] needed to fabricate tools, parts, forms and dies. Furthermore, my physical dexterity and stamina [STRIKE]assist[/STRIKE] enable me [STRIKE]in ensuring that I[/STRIKE] to work well [STRIKE]within this[/STRIKE] in various challenging environments.

I would be most grateful if you could consider me for any suitable positions available within your company, and I am available for interview at any time. I can also provide outstanding personal and professional references.

Thank you for your [STRIKE]time and[/STRIKE] kind consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely
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