Please check my writing

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dkqmail

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Below is my writing for cover letter. Any suggestion or modification from you will be of great help for me.

I'd like to know whether it is appropriate to use in cover letter?


I am a talented IT professional with extensive experience in the areas of network and systems administration, network infrastructure design, and project management. I am particularly interested in network services study, deployment, and administration in a free and open-source software based environment. I am always looking for new ways to automate and improve existing services. On the other hand I have a variety of leadership, communications, motivational, team building, and analytical skills. I enjoy helping and inspiring diverse groups to work towards a common goal, using my ability to understand, negotiate, and resolve conflicting needs. I have been a vital part of the growth and success of every company for which I have worked, and have played a key role in its development. Now, I would like to bring my knowledge and expertise to your company.

Your help will be appreciated greatly.
 

dkqmail

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Polish
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Poland
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Poland
Will someone please help me with my writing struggles?
 
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