A married couple always on a hectic schedule

[Gaya87]

Long Synopsis
A married couple always on a hectic schedule has to spend their days in a hospital as a result of exhaustion. Sweet moments shift into conflict when their friends and boss comes to visit them.


Short Synopsis
Prasetyo Ichsan Setiawan, a famous film director is married to Tania Wulandari, a manager at a prestigious bank. Despite their busy schedule, they spend time together intimately. One day Prasetyo collapses and is rushed to the hospital. Tania finds herself juggling between work, home and caring for their 5 year old daughter and Prasetyo. Finally, she is exhausted and is hospitalized in the same room with her husband. Chain of events happen when the ward turns into a battlefield, pushed them into a crazy situation.

 

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Re: Can someone pls check my grammar in these few sentences below?

Long Synopsis
A married couple always on a hectic schedule have to spend [STRIKE]their[/STRIKE] days in [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] hospital as a result of exhaustion. Sweet moments shift into conflict when their friends and boss come to visit them.


Short Synopsis
Prasetyo Ichsan Setiawan, a famous film director, is married to Tania Wulandari, a manager at a prestigious bank. Despite their busy schedule, they spend time together intimately. One day Prasetyo collapses and is rushed to the hospital. Tania finds herself [STRIKE]juggling between[/STRIKE] having to juggle work, home and caring for Prasetyo and their 5-year-old daughter. [STRIKE]and Prasetyo.[/STRIKE] Finally, she is exhausted and is hospitalized in the same room with her husband. A chain of events [STRIKE]happen[/STRIKE] takes place when the ward turns into a battlefield, pushing them into a crazy situation.

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