After a life-threatening accident

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After a life-threatening accident a man finds he is able to communicate with the spirits around him

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Masss and Jet Li are close buddies and small-time thieves. Situation forces them loot smugglers on a boat. On their return, they meet with an accident. Following the incident, Masss, realises that he has a supernatural power to see the ghosts. This makes ghosts approach him seeking for favours and Sakthi is one among them who is his look-alike Masss. Playing on his greed, Sakthi soon starts using Masss for his own needs. What happens when Mass realizes this and who is Sakthi?

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When a school teacher is assigned to a rural primary school, he realizes the head master went into corruption in selling the school's land at cheap price. Will he be able to save the school in time?

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A primary school teacher who is especially enthusiastic about Chinese language education, he takes on a teaching job in Wah Wah Chinese Primary School, a rural school on an island.When he finds out that the school has to be shut down because it does not have enough students, teacher Wah decides to go around recruiting students and lobbying for support for the school. Then, he realises that he has to deal with gangsters and profiteering businessmen to save the school.
 

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Re: Can someone pls check my grammar in these few sentences below (have to be in pres

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After a life-threatening accident, a man finds he is able to communicate with the spirits around him.

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Masss and Jet Li are close buddies and small-time thieves. Their situation forces them [STRIKE]loot[/STRIKE] to rob smugglers on a boat. On their return, they meet with an accident. Following the incident, Masss realizes that he has a supernatural power to see [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] ghosts. This makes ghosts approach him seeking [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE] favours, and Sakthi is one such ghost [STRIKE]among them[/STRIKE] who is also Masss's lookalike. [STRIKE]his look-alike Masss.[/STRIKE] Playing on his greed, Sakthi soon starts using Masss for his own needs. What happens when Mass realizes this, and who is Sakthi?

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When a school teacher is assigned to a rural primary school, he realizes the headmaster [STRIKE]went into[/STRIKE] is involved in corruption in selling the school's land at a cheap price. Will he be able to save the school in time?

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A primary school teacher who is especially enthusiastic about Chinese language education [STRIKE], he[/STRIKE] takes on a teaching job in Wah Wah Chinese Primary School, a rural school on an island. When he finds out that the school has to be shut down because it does not have enough students, [STRIKE]teacher[/STRIKE] Wah decides to go around recruiting students and lobbying for support for the school. Then, he realizes that he has to deal with gangsters and profiteering businessmen to save the school.

Consider saying "contend with gangsters" instead of "deal with gangsters."

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