infinity42
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Hello, I was wondering if the sentence structure or phrasing of this sentence feels slightly "off":
"I've got her taking care of my children, always making sure they eat properly, and then she leaves to her other part-time job."
Please leave any feedback. I'm curious to know your thoughts.
"I've got her taking care of my children, always making sure they eat properly, and then she leaves to her other part-time job."
Please leave any feedback. I'm curious to know your thoughts.
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