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    #1

    If he were

    Would you please correct the mistakes in my sentences.

    If he were a great author, as he likes to boast, people would read his books. But until now none of his novels had received positive response.

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    Re: If he were

    This might work:

    If he were a great author, as he likes to boast, people would read his books. But, to this day, none of his novels has received a positive response.

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    Re: If he were

    If he were a great author, as he likes to boast, people would read his books. But so far none of his novels has received a positive response.

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