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    My CV's introduction mistakes

    Hi!
    I would be so grateful if you could take a look at the introduction to my CV
    I just want it to be correct and sound good.

    "I've been studying Computer Science at AGH University of Science and Technology. I am highly motivated and currently I am seeking an internship to work in a IT company to help them expand."
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 14-Jul-2015 at 10:29.

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    Re: My CV's introduction mistakes

    Quote Originally Posted by brestmoor View Post
    "I've been studying
    Have you graduated yet?

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    Computer Science
    Is this the title of your degree course?

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    Re: My CV's introduction mistakes

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    Have you graduated yet?
    No, I haven't. I am going to start my third year of study in October this year.

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    Is this the title of your degree course?
    Yes

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    Re: My CV's introduction mistakes

    I am highly motivated and currently I am seeking an internship to work in a IT company to help them expand.

    Are you sure you would make such a difference to a company an intern?
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: My CV's introduction mistakes

    Quote Originally Posted by brestmoor View Post
    "I am 've been studying Computer Science at AGH University of Science and Technology. I am highly motivated, and currently I am seeking an internship to work in a IT company to develop my practical experience. to help them expand."
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