[CV] My CV's introduction mistakes

[brestmoor]

Hi!
I would be so grateful if you could take a look at the introduction to my CV
I just want it to be correct and sound good.

"I've been studying Computer Science at AGH University of Science and Technology. I am highly motivated and currently I am seeking an internship to work in a IT company to help them expand."

 

[teechar]

"I've been studying

Have you graduated yet?

Computer Science

Is this the title of your degree course?

 

[brestmoor]

Have you graduated yet?

No, I haven't. I am going to start my third year of study in October this year.

Is this the title of your degree course?

Yes

 

[tedmc]

I am highly motivated and currently I am seeking an internship to work in a IT company to help them expand.

Are you sure you would make such a difference to a company an intern?

 

[teechar]

"I am [STRIKE]'ve been[/STRIKE] studying Computer Science at AGH University of Science and Technology. I am highly motivated, and currently I am seeking an internship to work in a IT company to develop my practical experience. [STRIKE]to help them expand.[/STRIKE]"

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