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    Text: Haunted Road

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    Seven youngsters are on a road trip during ghost festival where they encounter a mysterious fog. Trapped in a deserted rest station, one of them die (or dies) and there is no way out.

    Long Synopsis
    During the month of ghost festival, seven youngsters are on their way to attend a friend's wedding when they pass by a crash site of a deadly road accident. Unaffected by the scene, they make disrespectful gestures to the dead victim. As they continue on their journey, a mysterious fog occurs, forcing the group to pullover at a deserted rest stop where strange things happen one after another. After one of them dies, their attempts to leave fail as they seem to go around the rest stop in circles.

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    Re: Text: Haunted Road

    Your piece assumes that the reader knows what "ghost festival" is. I certainly don't. If it's just one of many festivals with the same theme, you need to say "a ghost festival". If you're referring to one specific festival which has that title, then it's "Ghost Festival".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Text: Haunted Road

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    Your piece assumes that the reader knows what "ghost festival" is. I certainly don't. If it's just one of many festivals with the same theme, you need to say "a ghost festival". If you're referring to one specific festival which has that title, then it's "Ghost Festival".

    Specifically happens during the ghost festival month. Not a specific one festival.

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    Re: Text: Haunted Road

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaya87 View Post
    Short Synopsis
    Seven youngsters are on a road trip during the Ghost Festival where they encounter a mysterious fog. Trapped in a deserted rest station, one of them dies, and there is no way out.

    Long Synopsis
    During the month-long of Ghost Festival, seven youngsters are on their way to attend a friend's wedding when they pass by the crash site of a deadly road accident. Unaffected by the scene, they make disrespectful gestures to the dead victim. As they continue on their journey, a mysterious fog appears, occurs, forcing the group to pull over at a deserted rest stop where strange things happen one after another. After one of them dies, their attempts to leave get away fail as they seemed to go around the rest stop in circles.
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