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    are we taking it too far by blaming fast food restaurants for obesity?

    Hello,
    may i have some ideas about this topic, i have to write 6-9 pages about it and i can't use the google to help me find some ideas
    the topic is " Are we taking it too far by blaming fast-food restaurants for obesity? when is it individual responsibility and when is it appropriate to place blame?"
    the essay due on July 30 if you could help me with it
    please thank you

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    Re: are we taking it too far by blaming fast food restaurants for obesity?

    You're welcome to the forum, reyadrockros, but I'm afraid we don't help with students' assignments.

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    Re: are we taking it too far by blaming fast food restaurants for obesity?

    Quote Originally Posted by reyadrockros View Post
    Hello.
    May I have some ideas about this topic? I have to write 6-9 pages about it and ​I can't use the Google to help me find some ideas.
    The topic is "Are we taking it too far by blaming fast-food restaurants for obesity? When is it individual responsibility and when is it appropriate to place blame?"
    The essay is due on July 30. I would be grateful if you could help me with it.please Thank you.
    As you've already been told, we don't help with any homework or assignments. Work you submit to a teacher/tutor must be your own work, done with no help.

    However, in the meantime, please look at the corrections I have made to your post above, marked in red. It's important to follow these rules of written English at all times:

    - Start every sentence with a capital letter.
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    Good luck with your essay. After you submit it and receive it back from your teacher, you can come back to us if there are any comments or corrections you don't understand.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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