Exterior and Interior, outside, inside?

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- Look away, It be lost.
- It distance is 40 km.
- It national culture of Anangu.
- The both Uluru and Kata Tjuta.

Exterior:
- Exterior of house was painted by yellow.
- Exterior of car is black
Interior:
- Interior of house was made up very nice
- Interior of house have very much things.
- Interior of body.
Outside:
- There is a garden "in" outside my house.
- there are very much house Outside of road.
- There is someone outside the house
Inside:
- Go inside the house
- There is someone strange inside the house<br><br>
 

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- Look away, It be lost. :cross:
- It distance is 40 km. :cross:
- It national culture of Anangu. :cross:
- The both Uluru and Kata Tjuta. :cross:

Exterior:
- Exterior of house was painted by yellow. :cross:
- Exterior of car is black :cross:
Interior:
- Interior of house was made up very nice :cross:
- Interior of house have very much things. :cross:
- Interior of body. :cross:
Outside:
- There is a garden "in" outside my house. :cross:
- there are very much house Outside of road. :cross:
- There is someone outside the house :tick: (if you put a full stop at the end)
Inside:
- Go inside the house :tick: (if you put a full stop at the end)
- There is someone strange inside the house :tick: (if you put a full stop at the end) <br><br>

See above. Every one marked with :cross: contains at least one error.
 

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Look away and it will be lost.
It is distance is 40 km.
It is the national vulture of Anangu.
Uluru and Kata Tjuta are boths.

Exterior of the house was painted yellow.
Exterior of the car is black.

Interior of the house was made up very nice.
Interiror of the house have very much things.
Interior of the human body is diagrammed on this chart.

There is a garden outside my house
There are many houses a long side the road
 
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You have improved your sentences, but you are still missing punctuation. Please edit your post and attempt to punctuate all your sentences.

Once you've punctuated everything, one of us will be comment on which ones are correct and which ones still have errors. I will say, however, that despite the problems which remain, I can see improvement over your first attempt in post #1.

Good job on the work so far. See what you can work out on punctuation in post #3.
 

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- Look away, It has a man who is trying to steal a car after this car be lost.
- What is the distance to Moon? It is a great from here.
- There is a car in garage. It is black.
- It has so many restaurant, some convenience stores in along side the road.
Thanks.
 
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Do you think about in below sentence? That's correct or incorrect, please?
 

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They are all incorrect. Please try again.
 

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Ok, I have replace it.
 

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1) Look away and it will be lost.:tick:
[STRIKE]It is [/STRIKE]2) The distance is 40 km.:cross: You have two verbs here.
3) It is the national vulture of the Anangu. :cross: You need an article to make this sentence grammaticaly correct. However, it still has the following problem:

Anangu refers to an ethnic group. They do not have a country, so they can't have a national bird, animal. Instead they have cultural symbols.

The vulture is a cultural symbol of the Anagu.


4)Uluru and Kata Tjuta are boths.:cross: Sentence fragment. 'both' cannot be pluralized with 's', it is already plural.

5) The exterior of the house was painted yellow.:cross: You are missing an article before the subject of your sentence.
6) The exterior of the car is black.:cross:You are missing an article before the subject of your sentence.


7) Interior of the house was made up very nice.:cross:You are missing an article before the subject of your sentence.
8) Interiror of the house have very much things. :cross:You are missing an article before the subject of your sentence. You have a spelling error. You have a problem with subject/verb agreement.
9) Interior of the human body is diagrammed on this chart.:cross:You are missing an article before the subject of your sentence.

10) There is a garden outside my house You are missing punctuation.
11) There are many houses a long side the road You are missing punctuation. 'alongside' is one word.


You failed to punctuate your last two sentences.

I have made some corrections to #2-#6, to demonstrate some of your recurring issues. Since you have many recurring problems, I have made observations only on #7-10. Please re-write #7-10 in a new post.
 

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How did the "culture" become "vulture" of the Anangu?
OK, the two alphabets are next to each other in the keyboard.
 

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Tedmc, I didn't even consider that 'vulture' might have been a typo for 'culture'. Good point.

Lê Thiên Hoàng, you will have to clarify whether 'vulture' was a typo for 'culture' or not. If so, then that will change my response.
 

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How did the "culture" become "vulture" of the Anangu?
OK, the two [STRIKE]alphabets[/STRIKE] letters are next to each other [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] on the keyboard.
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