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    Arrow Could anyone kindly check my essay for any errors?!

    Indian families are nuts about kids. That is why a baby shower is considered (to be) a momentous ceremony among all the other ceremonies in my country. Basically, before mothers give birth to a child, they go on a shopping spree to buy baby wear, shoes, dolls and toys, and not to mention cradles and trams for their babies. Apart from that, the immediate family also gives the
    mother-to-be such stuff as a gift. Once a mother delivers her baby, everyone in close and distant family pay a visit to congratulate her.

    There is an elaborate and quite enjoyable party (which is) held to celebrate the birth of the baby and everyone is kindly/warmly welcomed to the party. In the party, the couple announce their baby’s name to the family, and interestingly enough, everyone wishes a happy and healthy life for the child. This ceremony is never-to-be-forgotten by typical Indian families with Indian roots. (or This ceremony is never-to-be-forgotten by typical Indian families that have an established cultural background.)

    Hello All,
    Could anyone kindly check my essay for any errors?!
    Thanks
    Last edited by nininaz; 26-Jul-2015 at 03:25.

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    Re: Could anyone kindly check my essay for any errors?!

    When are you going to submit your essay to your teacher to be graded/marked?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Could anyone kindly check my essay for any errors?!

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    When are you going to submit your essay to your teacher to be graded/marked?

    Hello,
    I don't want to submit my essay to my teacher. It is my own assignment. Now, I am learning English by myself. I just want to be checked for any errors.
    Thanks.

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