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    Shirayuki starts to live

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    Shirayuki starts to live in the kingdom of Clarines. She is looking for a job as a herbalist but comes to know about court herbalists.

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    Re: Shirayuki starts to live

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaya87 View Post

    Shirayuki starts goes to live in the kingdom of Clarines. She is looking for a job as a herbalist, but comes to know about ends up getting into the world of court herbalists.
    According to Wikipedia, Shirayuki becomes a court pharmacist, not a court herbalist.
    Consider amending your text to read "... the world of court pharmacists."

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    Re: Shirayuki starts to live

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    According to Wikipedia, Shirayuki becomes a court pharmacist, not a court herbalist.
    Consider amending your text to read "... the world of court pharmacists."
    Noted Teechar, let me check on this!

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    Re: Shirayuki starts to live

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaya87 View Post
    If there are any grammatical mistakes, please let me know. Thank you.
    Note my correction to the first part of your post.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 27-Jul-2015 at 12:25. Reason: correction to my correction
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Shirayuki starts to live

    If there are any grammatical mistakes, please let me know. Thank you.
    I am not a teacher.

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