Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
Would you please help me and correct the mistakes in my sentence? I am not sure if its phrasing and punctuation are correct.
Peter was afraid of losing his job because without it he would be nothing - a plain, small man who no woman would ever glance at in the street.
Peter was afraid of losing his job because without it he would be nothing - a plain, small man who no woman would ever glance at in the street.