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Is the following right? For example, do I have to put "would" in front of "negatively?

Jackson et al.’s research hypothesis was that
higher levels of socio-cultural adjustment would 1) postiively correlate with self-esteem and psychological adjustment and 2) negatively correlate with anxiety/somatic symptoms.
 

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Is the following right? For example, do I have to put "would" in front of "negatively"? Do I have to put "to" in front of "experience"? Thanks.

Jackson et al.’s research hypothesis was that higher levels of socio-cultural adjustment would positively correlate with self-esteem and psychological adjustment and would negatively correlate with anxiety/somatic symptoms.

However, the key recommendations from the most recent scholarly research are that foreigners living abroad are likely to have low self-esteem, high anxiety and somatic symtoms, and low life satisfaction/wellbeing and to experience low levels of sociocultural adaptation
 
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Is the following right, then?

Jackson et al.’s research hypothesis was that
higher levels of socio-cultural adjustment would positively correlate with self-esteem and psychological adjustment and would negatively correlate with anxiety/somatic symptoms.
 

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Duly merged. Eunkum, please don't start two threads on the same topic using the same quote.
 
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