Part five. A description of a picture. Please everyone check it.

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Lê Thiên Hoàng

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There is two young girl beauty. A girl is wearing a pink ... , skinny jeans standing on a chair. other girls is standing on the floor with a violet ... and a red pant. all people are making up a Chirtmast tree.
There are so many gifts lying on the floor.

Have it error about grammar in the sentence?
 

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We have said it before and we will, I'm sure, say it again. Your level is not yet high enough to construct this kind of piece. Let's take your very first sentence.

There is two young girl beauty.

1) Two people = plural = There are
2) Two people = plural = girls
3) Beauty = noun. You need the adjective "beautiful" and the word is wrong for a sentence with an adjective describing a noun.

Your sentence should read:

There are two beautiful girls.
 

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Also, please don't ask, "Please everyone check it."
There is no earthly way that everyone is going to check it. Acceptable alternatives are, "Could someone please check it?" or "Please, could someone check it?" or "Could someone check it, please?"
This is not necessary in your title though.
 

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Also, since you are clearly going to ask us to check for grammatical errors on a regular basis, you need to learn how to ask that question. It's not "Have it error about grammar in the sentence?" It's "Are there any grammatical errors in my sentences?"

Is "Have it error about grammar in the sentence?" a direct, word-for-word translation from your own language?
 

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And it's the girl with the purple pants who has "skinny jeans" if either of them do.
 

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'There are two beautiful young girls decorating a Christmas tree, under which many gifts are lying on the floor. One girl is wearing a short pink dress over dark blue jeans standing on a chair; another, a purple blouse and skinny violet trousers standing on the floor.'

I am not a teacher.
 
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