1. A Korean romantic comedy about three best buddies
andpromises to be full of youthful passion and hope, but can their close bonds survive the challenges of growing up?
2. A unique story about three friends, Chi-Ho, Dong-Woo, and Gyung-Jae. Each of them has just turned 20
years oldand the world is their oyster. With new opportunities, they can do what they want, love who they want, and even (,) cause a little havoc here and there.
1. The first part is a subject which does not link up with the second part. It is fixed by omitting conjunction 'and'.
2. The first sentence is not complete. The second sentence flows better without the comma after 'even'.
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