for it to fall

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Can one say

a. They put a bucket on the door so that it would fall on my head when I came in.
b. They put a bucket on the door for it to fall on my head when I came in.
c. They put a bucket on the door to fall on my head when I came in.
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a. is the best of the three.
 

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How about 'They put a bucket on the door, which would fall on my head when I came in.'?

Not a teacher.
 

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It's unnecessarily wordy.
 

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Would it be less wordy to say 'They put a bucket on the door before I came in'?
 

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Yes, it would, Matthew. It wouldn't give the same message, though.
 

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How about 'They put a bucket on the door, which would fall on my head when I came in.'?

Not a teacher.

In that sentence, the door would fall on his/her head.
 

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Logically, yes; grammatically, no.

On the door they balanced a bucket which would fall on my head when I came in.
 
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