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    Agent 8 goes on a mission to take down

    If there are any grammatical mistakes, please let me know. Thank you.

    Agent 8 goes on a mission to take down the notorious Criminal Lord and a casino owner but, they have to face obstacles in order to catch the thug.

    Agent 8 disguises as a Comic or Stand Up Comedian to find a comic who can link them to the Criminal Master named The King, the spectacular King of Gamble and a casino owner in Asia. To find and catch The King, they have to go through loads of obstacles, from tracking down by the Interpol and police for the bank robbery in the mission before, to confront all groups of thugs making their mission hard to accomplish.

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    Re: Agent 8 goes on a mission to take down

    Agent 8 goes on a mission to take down the notorious Criminal Lord and a casino owner but, they have to face obstacles in order to catch the thug.

    Agent 8 disguises as a comic or stand-up comedian to find a comic who can link them to the Criminal Master named The King, the spectacular King of Gamble and a casino owner in Asia. To find and catch The King, they have to go through loads of obstacles, from tracking down by the Interpol and police for the bank robbery in the mission before, to confront all groups of thugs making their mission hard to accomplish.
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: Agent 8 goes on a mission to take down

    There is no need for a comma after "but".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Agent 8 goes on a mission to take down

    Is Agent 8 an individual or a team of individuals?

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    Re: Agent 8 goes on a mission to take down

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    There is no need for a comma after "but".
    I would put one before but though.

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    Re: Agent 8 goes on a mission to take down

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    Is Agent 8 an individual or a team of individuals?
    Agent 8 is the group name. 8 members in a group, Teechar.

    Last edited by Gaya87; 12-Aug-2015 at 04:14.

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    Re: Agent 8 goes on a mission to take down

    How can a group of 8 disguise (themselves) as a comic?

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