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    Grammar Correcting

    Hey, my name is Yingchuan Zhao, and I would be glad to have my Grammar check.

    1. Even Bobby is unable to convince his parents for Paul to linger over a night, Paul would rather go home and come back the next day.

    2. It is formidable to receive other People's forgiveness sometimes.

    3. It is miserable for me to drive around D.C. area since the road are very difficult.

    4. Tony is in agony while he stumbles himself down from riding bicycle.

    Thank You,

    Yingchuan Zhao

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    Re: Grammar Correcting

    Is this homework?

    You could start by looking for the problem of logic in the first. I would also suggest going easy on using words from dictionaries that are meant to give sentences a sparkle- it's easy to misuse them.

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    Re: Grammar Correcting

    No, This is not a homework. This is just a free writing.

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