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    #1

    Is it correct,

    Dear Teachers,

    Please help me in correcting the following two sentences. Are they grammatically correct and if there are any errors, what are the error and why it is an error?

    FAUNA is an anytime check-in hotel offers best of the amenities and a great experience.

    FAUNA is an anytime check-in hotel, designed especially for business travellers, offers exclusive amenities and a great experience even for a day stay.


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    Norma.

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    Re: Is it correct,

    Please help me in correcting the following two sentences. Are they grammatically correct and if there are any errors, what are the errors and why it is an are they errors?

    FAUNA is an anytime a 24-hour-check-in hotel that offers the best of the amenities and a great experience.

    FAUNA is an anytime a 24-hour-check-in hotel (,) designed especially for business travellers. It offers exclusive amenities and a great experience even for a day's stay.

    Why do you write the name in block letters?
    You can also call it a "24-hour-reception hotel".
    Last edited by tedmc; 12-Aug-2015 at 08:26.
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    Re: Is it correct,

    So many errors...

    Thank you Tedmc.

    FAUNA capital letters I added just like that...branding...

    The second sentence..how to make it a a single sentence without breaking it?

    FAUNA isa 24-hour-check-in hotel designed especially for business travellers. It offers exclusive amenities and a great experience even for a day's stay.

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    Re: Is it correct,

    Designed especially for business travellers, FAUNA is a 24-hour-check-in hotel which offers exclusive amenities and a great experience even for a day's stay.
    I am not a teacher.

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    #5

    Re: Is it correct,

    Quote Originally Posted by tedmc View Post
    Designed especially for business travellers, FAUNA is a 24-hour-check-in hotel which (that) offers exclusive amenities and a great experience even for a day's stay.
    Can I use 'that' instead of 'which' in the above sentence?

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    Re: Is it correct,

    Yes. You can also write

    'Designed especially for business travellers, FAUNA is a 24-hour-check-in hotel offering exclusive amenities and a great experience even for a day's stay.

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