DrBlueThumb
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Hows this as a thesis statement?
Life is about conditioning your mind, body and soul. Once you stop conditioning yourself, the negative effects of being untrained begin to slowly devour you.
I got the idea from Les brown, not sure if it belongs to him, but here's the original:
"Life is a fight for territory, once you stop fighting for what you want, what you don't want will automatically take over"
Do I need to give someone credit for it?
Should I change words around or add words?
Does it make sense?
Life is about conditioning your mind, body and soul. Once you stop conditioning yourself, the negative effects of being untrained begin to slowly devour you.
I got the idea from Les brown, not sure if it belongs to him, but here's the original:
"Life is a fight for territory, once you stop fighting for what you want, what you don't want will automatically take over"
Do I need to give someone credit for it?
Should I change words around or add words?
Does it make sense?
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