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    Little angels

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    Please find out mistakes.
    Little angels, carrying their bags heavier than their own weight and higher than their own height and tears in their eyes, are heading towards their school today.

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    Re: Little angels

    Quote Originally Posted by Untaught88 View Post
    Hi.
    Please find point out any mistakes.

    Little angels, carrying their bags heavier and taller than they are, their own weight and higher than their own height and with tears in their eyes, are heading towards their to school today.
    See above for my corrections and suggested amendments, marked in red.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Little angels

    Can the "and" before "with tears" be omitted?
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: Little angels

    It could but I prefer it with it. It's the final observation in a list of what the children are doing while walking to school.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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