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    Post Correction of some phrases in my CV

    Hello guys,

    I am from Germany and I am applying for an intership in the US.
    I would really appreciate if you took a look to some of the phrases I used in the CV.
    Thank you in advance! :)
    Best regards!

    1:

    • Assistance in various industrial & consulting projects
    • Literature researches about design & implementation of various technology forecasting processes
    • Scanning, scouting & monitoring of technologies & markets
    • Participation in the daily business operations of technology management

    2:

    • Project-based work on the xxxx car
    • Function extension/process optimization of the new SAP-component evaluation database
    • Definition of various logistical & organizational processes
    • Creating training materials on the subject of standardization of quality-/inspection characteristics in motorsport
    • Measurements with manual measurement tools, bridge-type CMMs & optical coordinate measuring systems

    3:

    • Creation of the lecture notes & exercise documents for the lecture: Quality Management
    • Conceptual design & implementation of a quality management e-learning program
    • Creation of the documents of a Lean Management seminar
    • Literature research on the subject „Use of Ontologies in the Fault Management“ about intelligent incident reporting
    • Monitoring & support of various seminars & congresses
    • Collaboration across the entire spectrum of the operational daily business

    4:

    • Collaborative planning, organization & execution of student contact fairs, seminars & field trips

    5:

    • Industrial Engineering responsibilities
    • Setting, programming & operation of various machine tools

    6:

    • Introduction to machining & welding processes

    7:

    • Introduction to forming & molding processes

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      • Iraq
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      • Iraq

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    Re: Correction of some phrases in my CV

    Quote Originally Posted by sheo View Post
    Hello, guys,

    I am from Germany, and I am applying for an internship in the US.
    I would really appreciate if you took a look to at some of the phrases I used in the CV.
    Thank you in advance!
    Best regards!

    1:

    • Providing assistance in various industrial & consulting projects
    • Conducting literature research about on design & implementation of various technology forecasting processes
    • Scanning and scouting for & monitoring of technologies & markets
    • Participating in the daily business operations of technology management

    2:

    • Performing project-based work on the xxxx car
    • Implementing function extension/process optimization of the new SAP-component evaluation database
    • Defining various logistical & organizational processes
    • Creating training materials on the subject of standardization of quality/inspection characteristics in motorsport
    • Conducting precise measurements with manual measurement tools, bridge-type CMMs & optical coordinate measuring systems

    3:

    • Creation of the
    • Preparing lecture notes & exercise documents on for the lecture: quality management
    • Conceptual design & implementation of a quality management e-learning program
    • Creating of the documents of a Lean Management seminar
    • Literature research on the subject "Use of Ontologies in the Fault Management" about intelligent incident reporting
    • Monitoring & support of various seminars & congresses
    • Collaboration across the entire spectrum of the operational daily business

    4:

    • Collaborative planning, organization & execution staging of student contact fairs, seminars & field trips

    5:

    • Industrial Engineering responsibilities
    • Setting, programming & operating of various machine tools

    6:

    • Introduction to machining & welding processes

    7:

    • Introduction to forming & molding processes
    .

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