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    Help me with this sentence in English for my Statement of Purpose?

    First of all, I am not a native english speaker and am new to this forum, so please redirect me to the correct page if I have posted this in the wrong place.

    I am trying to write my Statement of Purpose for my Grad School and this is the sentence that I want help with.

    "Being born into an era of technological revolution and electronic ___________ I was extremely fascinated by the electronic appliances right from my childhood."

    So what should I fill in that blank? Something along the lines of revolution/industry. and also is this sentence right? I mean should there be a "the" before electronic appliances or not?

    Thanks. :D

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    Re: Help me with this sentence in English for my Statement of Purpose?

    Quote Originally Posted by rokyslash View Post
    First of all, I am not a native English speaker, and I am new to this forum, so please redirect me to the correct page if I have posted this in the wrong place.

    I am trying to write my Statement of Purpose for my Grad School and this is the sentence that I want help with.

    "Being born into an era of technological revolution and electronic ___________ I was extremely fascinated by the electronic appliances right from my childhood."

    So what should I fill in that blank? Something along the lines of revolution/industry. and Also, is this sentence right? I mean should there be a "the" before "electronic appliances" or not?

    Thanks.
    Try this:
    Growing up in an era of technological and electronic revolution, I've always been truly fascinated with electronic gadgets.

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