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    Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducin

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    Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

    Traffic accident have dramatically increased over the last few years, which is very alarming and thought provoking situation, some people argue that traffic offender should be greatly punished by imposing heavy fines and jailing them in prison,. Other state that the rate of accident could be slow down by implementing various safety measures, which are discussed below.

    Firstly, government should define a speed limit for different vehicles, while traveling inter-city and outer city. Moreover a mechanism should be implemented to monitor speed of the vehicle on the busiest part of the city. This can be done by installing cameras and linked it to the server of monitoring team. Furthermore, safety belts could save from severe injury in case of accident, should be mandatory to put on.

    Secondly, there should be periodic inspection of the vehicles every year by the authorize workshops of the government. Only passed vehicles are allowed to come on streets, violation of this rule could cause fine and prison simultaneously. Meanwhile government should tighten the procedure of getting driving license, a driving and computer test should be introduced to test the practical and oral knowledge about traffic rules and regulation.

    Thirdly, government should educate their people about rules and regulation of the traffic, if anyone found guilty of breaking rules should be fined. Offender could also be sent to jail depends on the type of the offense. Lastly, if individual continue to violate rules, driving license of offender should be canceled immediately and impose a life ban on driving.

    Finally, I believe that traffic issues could be solved by identifying problems and their solutions. By using latest technology we can overcome traffic problem immensely.

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    Re: Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to red

    Traffic accidents have dramatically increased over the last few years, which is a very alarming and thought-provoking situation. Some people argue that traffic offenders should be greatly severely punished by imposing heavy fines and jailing them in prison. Other state that the rate of accidents could be slow down reduced by implementing various safety measures, which are discussed below.

    Firstly, the government should define fix a speed limit for different vehicles(,) while traveling inter-city and outer within and out of the city. Moreover, a mechanism should be implemented to monitor speed of the vehicles on in the busiest part of the city. This can be done by installing cameras and linked it them to the a server of for monitoring team purposes. Furthermore, safety belts could save prevent from severe injury injuries in case of accidents, should be made mandatory to put on.

    Secondly, there should be periodic inspections of the vehicles every year by the authorized government workshops of the government. Only passed vehicles which pass inspections are allowed to comebe on the streets. Violation of this rule could cause would be subject to fine and prison imprisonment simultaneously. Meanwhile The government should also tighten the procedure of getting the issuance of driving licenses. A driving and computer theory test should be introduced to test the practical and oral theoretical knowledge about traffic rules and regulation.

    Thirdly, the government should educate their people about the observance of traffic rules and regulations of the traffic. if anyone Those found guilty of breaking rules should be fined. Offenders could also be sent to jail depending on the typeseverity of the offences. Lastly, if individual those who continue to violate rules would be liable to have their driving licenses suspended or cancelled of offender should be canceled immediately and impose a life ban on driving.

    Finally To sum up, I believe that traffic issues could be solved by identifying the problems and their solutions. By using the latest technologies we can overcome traffic problem immensely. the problems related to traffic could be effectively dealt with.
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    Re: Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to red

    Thank you so much for your time and efforts.

    I am really thnkful for your cooperation, it is giving me strength to overcome my problems in writing. :)

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    Re: Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to red

    Quote Originally Posted by fahad_a11 View Post
    Traffic accident have dramatically increased over the last few years.
    Where has this occurred? Is this something you know, or are you guessing?

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    Re: Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to red

    This is happening in my residing country KSA, thats all based on facts.

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