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Please evaluate IELTS essay and point out erros and mistakes.
Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Traffic accident have dramatically increased over the last few years, which is very alarming and thought provoking situation, some people argue that traffic offender should be greatly punished by imposing heavy fines and jailing them in prison,. Other state that the rate of accident could be slow down by implementing various safety measures, which are discussed below.
Firstly, government should define a speed limit for different vehicles, while traveling inter-city and outer city. Moreover a mechanism should be implemented to monitor speed of the vehicle on the busiest part of the city. This can be done by installing cameras and linked it to the server of monitoring team. Furthermore, safety belts could save from severe injury in case of accident, should be mandatory to put on.
Secondly, there should be periodic inspection of the vehicles every year by the authorize workshops of the government. Only passed vehicles are allowed to come on streets, violation of this rule could cause fine and prison simultaneously. Meanwhile government should tighten the procedure of getting driving license, a driving and computer test should be introduced to test the practical and oral knowledge about traffic rules and regulation.
Thirdly, government should educate their people about rules and regulation of the traffic, if anyone found guilty of breaking rules should be fined. Offender could also be sent to jail depends on the type of the offense. Lastly, if individual continue to violate rules, driving license of offender should be canceled immediately and impose a life ban on driving.
Finally, I believe that traffic issues could be solved by identifying problems and their solutions. By using latest technology we can overcome traffic problem immensely.
Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Traffic accident have dramatically increased over the last few years, which is very alarming and thought provoking situation, some people argue that traffic offender should be greatly punished by imposing heavy fines and jailing them in prison,. Other state that the rate of accident could be slow down by implementing various safety measures, which are discussed below.
Firstly, government should define a speed limit for different vehicles, while traveling inter-city and outer city. Moreover a mechanism should be implemented to monitor speed of the vehicle on the busiest part of the city. This can be done by installing cameras and linked it to the server of monitoring team. Furthermore, safety belts could save from severe injury in case of accident, should be mandatory to put on.
Secondly, there should be periodic inspection of the vehicles every year by the authorize workshops of the government. Only passed vehicles are allowed to come on streets, violation of this rule could cause fine and prison simultaneously. Meanwhile government should tighten the procedure of getting driving license, a driving and computer test should be introduced to test the practical and oral knowledge about traffic rules and regulation.
Thirdly, government should educate their people about rules and regulation of the traffic, if anyone found guilty of breaking rules should be fined. Offender could also be sent to jail depends on the type of the offense. Lastly, if individual continue to violate rules, driving license of offender should be canceled immediately and impose a life ban on driving.
Finally, I believe that traffic issues could be solved by identifying problems and their solutions. By using latest technology we can overcome traffic problem immensely.
