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    A gangster falls in love

    Can anyone check my grammatical mistakes? Thank you.

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    Maari, a gangster falls in love with his partner, Sridevi but he seeks revenge on two policemen after he is accused of smuggling by the duo.

    Long Synopsis
    Maari is a local don and he focuses his attention completely towards pigeon race and almost gets addicted to it. During a clash, Maari transforms into a small time don. When he begins to rule his area, everything seems to be on track for Maari until meets Arjun Kumar, a police officer, decides to put an end to Maari’s dream run. How does Maari handle an intellectual police officer form, Arjun Kumar?

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    Re: A gangster falls in love

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaya87 View Post
    Can anyone check my grammatical mistakes? Thank you.

    Short Synopsis
    Maari, a gangster, falls in love with his partner, Sridevi, but he seeks revenge on two policemen after he is accused of smuggling by them. the duo.

    Long Synopsis
    Maari is a local don and he who focuses his attention (almost) completely towards on pigeon racing and almost gets addicted to obsessed with it. During After a clash with a rival, Maari transforms into becomes a small time don. When he begins to rule his area, However, Maari gets his own territory, and everything seems to be on track for him until he meets Arjun Kumar, a police officer, who decides to put an end to Maari’s dream run. How does Maari handle an this intellectual police officer? form, Arjun Kumar?
    Note:
    - You didn't mention Sridevi in the long synopsis.
    - Do you mean that Arjun Kumar is "smart", "clever" or "intelligent", or do you really intend to use "intellectual" to describe him?

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    Re: A gangster falls in love

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    Note:
    - You didn't mention Sridevi in the long synopsis.
    - Do you mean that Arjun Kumar is "smart", "clever" or "intelligent", or do you really intend to use "intellectual" to describe him?
    Two things,

    - Yes, you’re right. At the same time, I did mention two policemen in a short synopsis, but didn’t in the long, just spotted. Ok, lesson learned.
    - Since he’s playing a police officer character, he is extremely smart in this movie. So, I decided to define him as “intellectual”.

    Revised as below:
    Maria, a local don who has his own territory, but he seeks revenge on a policeman after he is accused of smuggling by him.

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    Re: A gangster falls in love

    I'm even more confused now!
    Is Arjun Kumar the name of an actor or a fictitious character in the film?
    Also, who is "Maria?"

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    Re: A gangster falls in love

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    I'm even more confused now!
    Is Arjun Kumar the name of an actor or a fictitious character in the film?
    Also, who is "Maria?"
    - Vijay: Plays the role of inspector Arjun Kumar in 'Maari' (a fictitious character in the film)
    - Please accept my apologies, teechar! It’s “Maari” not “Maria”. A single spelling mistakes change the whole meaning of the sentence. Today, I realized the spelling of words is very crucial in writing.

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    Re: A gangster falls in love

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaya87 View Post
    Maari, a local don who has his own territory, but he seeks revenge on a policeman after he Maari is accused of smuggling by him.
    Use "smart" or "intelligent" instead of "intellectual."

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