megafunc
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Hello,
I am writing an essay about the newest technology in very far future. During my writing I did write an extraordinarily long sentence but I'm not sure whether or not it is appropriate in English. And here's the sentence :
Putting the meaning aside, is there any problem with the sentence? Is it considered a bad writing style when writing English?
Any help would be very appreciated. Thanks.
I am writing an essay about the newest technology in very far future. During my writing I did write an extraordinarily long sentence but I'm not sure whether or not it is appropriate in English. And here's the sentence :
...You may even need to consider saving the cat due to the lastest technology allowing you to personally save a cat in a 100m tall tree without much difficulty and the cat being severely wounded just in case the cat might be likely to fall in a very short moment later and you really wouldn't want regret your doings later if bad things like this happened to occur.
Putting the meaning aside, is there any problem with the sentence? Is it considered a bad writing style when writing English?
Any help would be very appreciated. Thanks.
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