Student or Learner
Can one say
a. I stared at her, with bandage wrapped around her head like a mummy.
b. I stared at her, complete with bandage wrapped around her head like a mummy.
Are the sentences grammatical? Is it grammatically clear what word 'like a mummy' modifies?
Would something like this work?
Her head was so wrapped in bandages that she looked like a mummy and I couldn't help but stare.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.