[Essay] Email

[AnnaBu]

Dear Sir/Madam,

I`d highly appreciate if you could check the following email for mistakes. I`d be very grateful for any remarks of yours.

[FONT=&quot]Hello Tom,[/FONT]

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[FONT=&quot]The thing is I cannot get in touch with Sam and unfortunately I am not authorized to change any amounts without him.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]We could check the following records available to me:[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]1) ‘Sam agreed with you to fix prices until August’.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]The record was created in March.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]2) ‘Sam provided you the monthly prices plan from August until the end of the year’. [/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]The record was created in July. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Here is also noted that prices were discussed during the visit of our team to your office.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]Please let me know what the issue is.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]Best regards,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot] [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Jane

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[teechar]

Hello Tom,


The thing is, I cannot get in touch with Sam, and unfortunately I am not authorized to change any amounts without him.

We could check the following records available to me:

1) ‘Sam agreed with you to fix prices until August.’
That record was created in March.

2) ‘Sam provided you the monthly prices plan from August until the end of the year.’
That record was created in July.

[STRIKE]Here is[/STRIKE]Please also note that prices were discussed during [STRIKE]the visit of[/STRIKE] our team's visit to your office.

Please let me know [STRIKE]what the[/STRIKE] if I can be of any further help regarding this issue. [STRIKE]is.[/STRIKE]

Best regards,

Jane

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