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Some people say that the Internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?

There is no doubt that internet has immense influence on the people over the last few years. Technological advancements also contribute a lot in widespread usage of this technology. Some people argue that internet provide fast, reliable and cheapest ways of communications. Others state that people become isolated and disconnected because of excessive use of internet. I believe that internet has undeniable benefits and it helps people to link with each other.

Internet provides different ways of communications, which are highly reliable and adoptable. Before the advent of internet, people use others medium of communication such as letters, phone calls etc. which cost them handsome amount and time. However, internet gradually changed the ways the people communicate. Nowadays, everyone have mobile, laptop, tablet etc. these devices are equipped with internet thatís makes them in touch with their peer group using social networking applications.

It is often seen that people are becoming unsocial due to internet. They are relying more on technology than their friends and relatives. They consider communicating over internet is sufficient and do not like to bother meeting each other. Sometime individuals living in same premises prefer to talk using cellphones and gadgets rather than talking directly.

To sum up, I believe that advantages of internet overweigh its disadvantages. Internet makes this world as a global village by removing the barrier of distance. Economical ways of communication advocate people to talk more freely without worrying about cost. According to recent survey about 70 percent of the world is using internet for communication. This survey justifies the importance of internet in our lives.