I highly appreciate if someone will correct this email.

[bartachiali]

Dear Nadia,
Following my recent letter and attachments on the 10 Aug 2015 I am enclosing additional document with this letter.
Additional to my other attachment, I am enclosing the last two passport whom issued in 2001 and 2010 with the date of birth 12 01 1968. Furthermore I am enclosing the amended passport issued on 2014 for your use and information.

[+Technist Warp-]

Dear Nadia,
Following my recent letter and attachments on the 10 Aug 2015 I am enclosing additional document with this letter.
Additional to my other attachment, I am enclosing the last two passport whom issued in 2001 and 2010 with the date of birth 12 01 1968. Furthermore I am enclosing the amended passport issued on 2014 for your use and information.

Dear Nadia,
Following my recent letters and attachments on the 10th of Aug 2015, I am enclosing this additional document with this letter.
In addition to my other attachment, I am enclosing the last two passports which were issued in 2001 and 2010 with the date of birth 12-01-1968. Furthermore, I am enclosing the amended passport issued on 2014 for your use and information.


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[bartachiali]

thank you, but I need to re-format the letter rather that some grammar mistakes.

[Piscean]

In what way do you want to re-format it?

[emsr2d2]

Your title asked us to correct it. That's what +TechnistWarp did. If you wanted it "re-formatted" (whatever that means), that's what you should have said.