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    Thumbs up I highly appreciate if someone will correct this email.

    Dear Nadia,
    Following my recent letter and attachments on the 10 Aug 2015 I am enclosing additional document with this letter.
    Additional to my other attachment, I am enclosing the last two passport whom issued in 2001 and 2010 with the date of birth 12 01 1968. Furthermore I am enclosing the amended passport issued on 2014 for your use and information.

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    #2

    Re: I highly appreciate if someone will correct this email.

    Quote Originally Posted by bartachiali View Post
    Dear Nadia,
    Following my recent letter and attachments on the 10 Aug 2015 I am enclosing additional document with this letter.
    Additional to my other attachment, I am enclosing the last two passport whom issued in 2001 and 2010 with the date of birth 12 01 1968. Furthermore I am enclosing the amended passport issued on 2014 for your use and information.
    Dear Nadia,
    Following my recent letters and attachments on the 10th of Aug 2015, I am enclosing this additional document with this letter.
    In addition to my other attachment, I am enclosing the last two passports which were issued in 2001 and 2010 with the date of birth 12-01-1968. Furthermore, I am enclosing the amended passport issued on 2014 for your use and information.


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    #3

    Re: I highly appreciate if someone will correct this email.

    thank you, but I need to re-format the letter rather that some grammar mistakes.

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    #4

    Re: I highly appreciate if someone will correct this email.

    In what way do you want to re-format it?
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 21-Sep-2015 at 17:55. Reason: Fixed typo

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    #5

    Re: I highly appreciate if someone will correct this email.

    Your title asked us to correct it. That's what +TechnistWarp did. If you wanted it "re-formatted" (whatever that means), that's what you should have said.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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