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    Post official letter needs correction

    To whom it may concern

    This is to certify that Mr. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx has graduated from the Electrical Engineering Department in the Faculty of Engineering, Denver Univesity (Derna Campus), and been awarded B.Sc. in Electrical Engineering. This is also to confirm that ***the primary language of the Electrical Engineering program in Derna Campus is English.

    This letter has been issued upon the request of the above-named for whatever legal purpose it may serve.



    Registrar of Faculty of Engineering or Faculty of Engineering Registrar
    kieth George

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    Re: official letter needs correction

    I would expect the admin/academic staff at Denver University to be competent speakers of English!

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    Re: official letter needs correction

    Isn't it necessary to state the year the person graduated?

    What is the purpose of the sentence in the second paragraph?

    I think the name of the registrar should go before the designation and should be in capital letters.
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: official letter needs correction

    Quote Originally Posted by zead View Post
    To whom it may concern:

    This is to certify that Mr.xxxxx has graduated in [year] from the Electrical Engineering Department in the Faculty of Engineering, Denver University (Derna Campus), and been was awarded a B.Sc. in Electrical Engineering.

    This is also to confirm that *** (why are these asterisks here?) the primary language of the Electrical Engineering program in on Derna Campus is English.

    This letter has been issued upon the request of the above-named for whatever legal purpose it may serve.

    kieth [I imagine his name is actually] Keith George
    Registrar of Faculty of Engineering or Faculty of Engineering Registrar
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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