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    Please check my introduction paragraph

    Recent advancements in technology have led to many changes in our daily lives, but some people would argue that we are becoming too dependent on technology and that not all these changes are beneficial.
    Give your opinion and support your argument.

    Advances in technology have led to significant changes in our lifestyle. Some people believe that we are becoming more and more relying on technology which impact our social life. In my point of view, technology developments have enhanced our life quality and its advantages are more far than its disadvantages.

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    Re: Please check my introduction paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by ashkanm View Post
    Recent advancements in technology have led to many changes in our daily lives, but some people would argue that we are becoming too dependent on technology and that not all these changes are beneficial.
    Give your opinion and support your argument.

    Advances in technology have led to significant changes in our lifestyle. Some people believe that we are becoming more and more relying reliant on technology, which impacts our social life. In my point of view, technological developments have enhanced our life quality and its the advantages are more far than its outweigh the disadvantages.
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    Re: Please check my introduction paragraph

    Thank you very much


    I wanna know if it is good introduction for an easy ? You help me to correct the grammar, I would like to hear your idea about structures ?

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    Re: Please check my introduction paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by ashkanm View Post
    Thank you very much.
    You're welcome.
    In the future, you don't need to make a separate post to thank someone. Just click the "Thank" and/or "Like" buttons to show your appreciation.

    Quote Originally Posted by ashkanm View Post
    I want to na know if it is good introduction for an essay. easy ? You've helped me to correct the grammar; I would like to hear your idea about what you think of the structure.
    Your introduction is fine.

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