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    Please check the order of words

    Please tell me if the following order of words is admissible in the English sentence:

    With the Machinery Management System shall be equipped the rotating equipment of process units that holds key positions in the process and is responsible for safety of the production plant, whose failure can result in a man-made accident (explosion, fire) and/or a significant reduction in technical-and-economic figures of the production plant.

    If not, then how must I re-phrase the sentence?

    I tried to render as follows:

    The Machinery Management System shall be used used for equipping the rotating equipment of process units that holds key positions in the process and is responsible for safety of the production plant, whose failure can result in a man-made accident (explosion, fire) and/or a significant reduction in technical-and-economic figures of the production plant.

    But in this case, I guess, the meaning is different, is not it?

    Thank you in advance

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    Re: Please check the order of words

    Are you trying to say that key pieces of rotating equipment shall be equipped with a Machinery Management System?

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    Re: Please check the order of words

    Soothing Dave, yes, exactly. The attribute is too long to put

    Please excuse me for my late response.

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