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Please help me to re-frame the paragraph, I am preparing a feedback form so I want to write something before the form.
"We would like to know about your valuable feedbacks and suggestions for better improvement and to make our website more informative for our users. We are receiving very good comments and emails but we donít know what and where exactly we needs to improvement. To connect with all of our users we have prepared a feedback and suggestion form, this is the best way to know about our userís requirements and feedback."
We would appreciate it very much if you would give us your feedback and suggestions on the form provided, to help make our website more informative and for us to make improvements to the site to serve you better.
Last edited by tedmc; 16-Sep-2015 at 12:12.
I am not a teacher.