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    paragraph rewrite

    I have these 2 paragraphs . Grammar seems to be correct , but is there a better way to rewrite these ?


    Create views ( based on db catalog tables) with required columns from db catalog tables. This step will create 14 new views in YS schema. Thus, reducing risk by not giving access to 22 SYS tables which include sensitive tables like dba_users.


    Create a wrapper function around md.get_ddl. As a result , restricting access to other functions of md package ( like DP_DDL,G_G_DDL etc.) to test_user.

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    Re: paragraph rewrite

    I'm afraid it's meaningless to me.

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    Re: paragraph rewrite

    Create views ( based on db catalog tables) with required columns from db catalog tables. This step will create 14 new views in YS schema. Thus, reducing risk by not giving access to 22 SYS tables which include sensitive tables like dba_users.
    Couldn't you delete the part in brackets as you then repeat db catalog tables. If you create these views with columns from db tables, why do you have to tell us that it is based on db catalog tables as well?


    Create a wrapper function around md.get_ddl. As a result , restricting access to other functions of md package ( like DP_DDL,G_G_DDL etc.) to test_user.
    The second part is not a complete sentence. How about this:

    Create a wrapper function around md.get_ddl, thus restricting access to other functions of md package ( like DP_DDL,G_G_DDL etc.) to test_user.

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    Re: paragraph rewrite

    I think it's ok and I've been computer scientist.

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    #5

    Re: paragraph rewrite

    Quote Originally Posted by nestorac View Post
    I think it's ok and I've been computer scientist.
    It's not OK. I don't know anything about the subject, but I can spot a couple of mistakes that need correction:

    Create views (no space based on db catalog tables) with required columns from db catalog tables. This step will create 14 new views in YS schema, thus T reducing risk by not giving access to 22 SYS tables* which include sensitive tables like dba_users.

    * a comma may be required here

    Create a wrapper function around md.get_ddl, As a result thus restricting access to other functions of md package (no space like DP_DDL,G_G_DDL, etc.) to test_user.

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