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    People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an

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    People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience. Do you think public speaking skill is really important? Should student be taught public speaking at school?

    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

    Public speaking is an art that requires lots of courage, confidence and will-power. Most of the people lack in this skill because of its challenging and daring type of nature. Some of the schools have made it mandatory constituent of learning because of its importance in practical lives.

    Presentation plays a pivotal role in career development both at school and in office. Researchers at universities used this technique to convey their ideas and findings; their grip on this skill is susceptible to success. The better they are in public speaking, the more changes to convince and satisfy to their audience. Furthermore, many sales companies hired good presenters in order to boost up the sale of their products. Successful agents get lots of incentives in term of money and gift from their employers.

    There is no doubt that children are more opted toward learning in their childhood. Early training of public speaking would help in reducing their shyness and build confidence to face people. The continuity of this training in later classes will help to achieve their lofty ambitions of public speaking. This will enable them to stand and deliver anywhere. However, some time it also deterrent the growth of student. A large number of students show menace while performing this activity.

    To sum up, I would like to say that presentation should be a must activity in schools. It will not only help in prevailing student confidence but also ensure their success in their future lives, Parents and teachers should encourage children to participate in these assignments and work to overcome their problems in this regard.

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    Re: People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before

    What is the purpose of this piece of writing? Is it an assignment?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before

    I am preparing for IELTS writing task 2.

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    Re: People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before

    Quote Originally Posted by fahad_a11 View Post
    Please point out errors.


    People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience. Do you think public speaking skill is really important? Should student be taught public speaking at school?

    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

    Public speaking is an art that requires lots of courage, confidence and will-power. Most of the people lack in this skill because of its challenging and daring type of nature. Some of the schools have made it mandatory constituent of learning because of its importance in practical lives.

    Presentation plays a pivotal role in career development both at school and in office. Researchers at universities used this technique to convey their ideas and findings; their grip on this skill is susceptible to success. The better they are in public speaking, the more changes to convince and satisfy to their audience. Furthermore, many sales companies hired good presenters in order to boost up the sale of their products. Successful agents get lots of incentives in term of money and gift from their employers.

    There is no doubt that children are more opted toward learning in their childhood. Early training of public speaking would help in reducing their shyness and build confidence to face people. The continuity of this training in later classes will help to achieve their lofty ambitions of public speaking. This will enable them to stand and deliver anywhere. However, some time it also deterrent the growth of student. A large number of students show menace while performing this activity.

    To sum up, I would like to say that presentation should be a must activity in schools. It will not only help in prevailing student confidence but also ensure their success in their future lives, Parents and teachers should encourage children to participate in these assignments and work to overcome their problems in this regard.
    This time, I’ve looked at at your word usage. I think you’re trying too hard at this stage to use ‘big words’ without a familiarity of their usage. I’ve marked some of the more awkward, or wrong, in red.
    Also, you must pay more attention to i) correct tense, and ii) agreement endings.

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    Re: People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before

    Can you please tell the substitute for these words? It will help me in understanding there practical use.

    What do you mean by agreement ending?

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