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    Please point out errors. In many countries, sports and exercises classes are replace

    Please point out errors.

    In many countries, sports and exercises classes are replaced with the academic subjects.

    Discuss the effects of this trend.


    Sport is an important constituent of education at school and universities. However, there is dramatic shift in this trend in some developing countries over the last few years. The authorities concerned claim that lengthy syllabus, competitive learning and studies pressure are the main hindrances that mitigate student interest to pursue in this field. I think this is not a good practice to exercise; children should provide opportunities to participate in physical activities that would help them in relaxing and developing skills such as leadership, team work and handling pressure.


    Sports play a pivotal role in health and could significantly contribute in achieving others skills that are also important for a successful person. For instance, lack of these activities will make people lethargic and they will become more susceptible to diseases such as obesity and laziness. Furthermore it is also seen that students without these activities are more hyper and violent in their attitudes, this will lead to severe problems in the society.


    Nowadays, students have to perform exceptionally well in order to compete in their peer group. That increased panic, tension and un-relaxing conditions. Therefore, exercise is a one way that can reduce their studies woes and help them to relax and reenergize for their future studies. In addition to this, students who are good in sports activities can adopt it as their future career.


    To sum up, I would like to say that eliminating sports activities from school curriculum would have dire consequences on students and society. We would less likely to produce players for our nation teams. Apart from that students mental health greatly negatively affect with the absence of sports.

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    Re: Please point out errors. In many countries, sports and exercises classes are rep

    Is this a homework assignment?

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    Re: Please point out errors. In many countries, sports and exercises classes are rep

    Trying to improve my writing skills, as I have to appear in IELTS test.

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    Re: Please point out errors. In many countries, sports and exercises classes are rep

    I was just curious as to where the question came from.

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    Re: Please point out errors. In many countries, sports and exercises classes are rep

    Actually i take questions from internet and then write on it.

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    Re: Please point out errors. In many countries, sports and exercises classes are rep

    OK.

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    Re: Please point out errors. In many countries, sports and exercises classes are rep

    No body is interested to evaluate my essays.

    why don't you help me by checking my essays?

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