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    How i can imrove the language of the below sentence ( which is little technical)

    It can be seen from above graph that with increasing cable stiffness maximum lifting height also increases. And also results in larger loads being induced onto the outer casing. Henceforth it is recommended to maintain the smaller loads onto the casing; rigid joint shall not be lifted 12.5 meter for cold cable. Figure 6 shows the model at the maximum lifting height for the Johan1cable with minimum bend stiffness.

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    Re: How i can imrove the language of the below sentence ( which is little technical)

    Quote Originally Posted by johan12102015 View Post
    It can be seen from the above graph that with increasing cable stiffness, maximum lifting height also increases and . And also results in larger loads being induced onto the outer casing. Henceforth it is recommended to maintain the use smaller loads on to the casing, and the rigid joint shall not be lifted 12.5 meter for above the cold cable. Figure 6 shows the model at the maximum lifting height for the Johan1 cable with minimum bending stiffness.
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