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  1. Boris Tatarenko's Avatar
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    #1

    Young people with a diploma are likely to be hired

    Young people with a diploma are likely to be hired since nowadays employers have a tendency to look for youngsters because of their passion to learn and earn money.

    Is the sentence above grammatically correct? (I'm sure it doesn't sound natural, but I hope it sounds formal)
    Please, correct all my mistakes. I should know English perfectly and if you show me my mistakes I will achieve my dream a little bit faster. A lot of thanks.

    Not a teacher nor a native speaker.

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    Re: Young people with a diploma are likely to be hired

    "... youngsters with a passion to learn ..." sounds better to me, but I'm not sure if it's your intended meaning.


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    Re: Young people with a diploma are likely to be hired

    "... employers have a preference for youngsters ..." sounds better to me, but I'm not sure if it's your intended meaning.

    I am not a teacher.

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