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    Very brief Cover Letter

    Hello everyone,
    I have to write in British English a very few lines about my experience and my aim for a career. I am not sure about a few expressions I have used. I would be very grateful if you could have a look and let me know if I am correct or if the English syntax should be enhanced.
    Thank you very much in advance for your help.

    I have a two and a half years' experience in various environments:
    - After receiving my Master's degree, I started working in sales oriented positions where I provided technical assistance regarding products and did some business development.
    - I progressed to analytical roles where I gained exposure to Corporate Finance (conducted deal marketing materials and valued companies) and Credit Risk analysis.
    I am looking for new opportunities, ideally that would lead on the long-run to financial analysis , but I remain open to other job propositions.
    I am fluent in French, English and have good understanding of Spanish.
    Last edited by xikitaa; 17-Oct-2015 at 18:25. Reason: added details

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    Re: Very brief Cover Letter

    Quote Originally Posted by xikitaa View Post

    I have a two and a half years' experience in various environments: [delete 'a']

    - After receiving my Master's degree, I started working in sales-oriented [insert hyphen]positions where I provided technical assistance regarding products and did some business development.


    - I progressed to analytical roles where I gained exposure to Corporate Finance (conducting deal marketing materials and valuing companies) and Credit Risk Analysis.


    I am looking for new opportunities, ideally ones that would lead in the long[delete hyphen] run to financial analysis[delete space], b
    ut I remain open to other job propositions.

    I am fluent in French and English and have a good understanding of Spanish.
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      • Native Language:
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    #3

    Re: Very brief Cover Letter

    Hi,

    I saw you wanted your work reviewing for your cover letter -why not check out his site: [COMMERCIAL LINK REMOVED] -he’s doing some pretty good corrections, fast too
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 29-Nov-2015 at 15:35. Reason: Removed commercial link

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