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    #2 Letter to friend

    I'm preparing to my A-level exam in May so I'm going to use with your help.
    Could I please you check the following letter?

    Dear Marta,
    I hope you're doing well. I want to share with you last news.
    I still live in London. I'm studing and waiting on my last exam. If I'll take the exam I'll have degree.
    So I've devoted a lot of time to learning. I'd like finish a university and see you. When I'll pass the exam I'll come back to Poland.
    The second thing to tell you is about my new friend. I met him three months ago and He became my the best friend in London. He's from Scotland. When I heard him the first time I couldn't understand him. His accent is very strange. But I thought that there's no harm in a way of speaking so I tried talk with him. The first attempt was very embarrassing. But a few minutes later I knew what he said. I was beginning to talk with him. We told about a culture and history of Scotland. In the future I hope to visit Scotland. When he'll come back to his home I'll can visit him and stay in Scotland in other to visit that the beautiful country.

    I'm looking forward to hear you.

    So I know, My imagine friend Marta will be very unlucky because she must reading my letters. But one day My letters will become a good and she'll be happy when she gave letter for me.

    And I think that It's better than my last letter.
    https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/t...tter-to-friend
    The teacher at my school told me that I have problems with articles so I've learnt about articles but I have to read more about it.
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    Re: #2 Letter to friend

    Dear Marta,

    I hope you're doing well. I want to share my news with you. last news.
    I still live in London. I'm studying and waiting on for my last exam. If I'll take I pass the exams, I'll have a degree. So I've devoted a lot of time to learning. I'd like to finish university and see you (as soon as possible). When I'll I pass the exam, I'll come back to Poland.

    The second thing to tell you is about my new friend. I met him three months ago, and he became my the best friend in London. He's from Scotland. When I heard him the first time, I couldn't understand him. His accent is very strange. But I thought that there's no harm in his way of speaking, so I tried talking with him. The first attempt was very embarrassing. But a few minutes later, I knew what he was saying. said. I was beginning to talk with him. We told talked about the culture and history of Scotland. In the future, I hope to visit Scotland. When he'll come back to his home I'll My Scottish friend has told me that I can visit him and stay in Scotland and stay in his house. in other Now, I'm really looking forward to visiting that the beautiful country.

    I'm looking forward Take care, and I hope to hear from you soon.

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    Re: #2 Letter to friend

    Thank you very much ! I made a few stupid mistakes. I must learning more and more

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    Re: #2 Letter to friend

    Quote Originally Posted by Milczek View Post
    Thank you very much!
    You're most welcome.

    Quote Originally Posted by Milczek View Post
    I made a few stupid mistakes.
    Think of mistakes as great opportunities to learn new things.

    Quote Originally Posted by Milczek View Post
    I must learn ing more and more
    You will, if you persevere.

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